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Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Here's another one I wrote last nite. it was not a really good nite.?

I don't want to say good bye





Baby please don't let me go,


I love you so much, you know that it's so.


Good times and bad, yeah we've had our share.


Prove it to me babe, that you still really care.











Somewher along the road what was lost,


The love we once had, what was the cost?


You and I are broken, we've come apart,


I can't live this way, we need a new start.





Please let me back, back into your life,


Show me you still want to be my loving wife.


No sex might be alright with you,


But not for me babe, it just will not do.





Decide what you need and if it is me,


If it is not, then please let me be.


Leavings not what I ever wanted to do,


My life is not, like an old worn out shoe.





Baby I want you back with me today,


I've been on my knees, and God knows I've prayed.


I love you more than name it, anything,


But your rejection,like a scorpion sting.

Here's another one I wrote last nite. it was not a really good nite.?
Beautiful! Youre wife needs to see this and the rest of your poems!! I am amazed by your talent for poetry!!
Reply:This poem really makes me feel sad. My poor undercover poet, your love for your wife is true. Don't let this problem depress you more. Give her a little time, talk to her. I know that she'll understand, read her your poems so she can know what are you going through.





Always until the end your angel of San Juan


Marilyn
Reply:thats soo cutee! its veryy good!
Reply:I love your writing, it is so original! GOOD LUCK!
Reply:i liked it and it you really feel this way, is a great one. hope everything gets better. keep writing, it makes a good healing for your heart.
Reply:Steve, these are beautiful, but so sad. I can now understand what you were talking about earlier, although I don't quite understand. I think you should send these poems to her, and I hope she understands.




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